Good job! Assuming this is your first animation, it's pretty OK.
3 stars for effort.
Author Comments
This is my, "I'm not dead" sort of thing. Lel.
Don't judge it by it's cover, this took days to make, and I'm just so bad at animating, so bear with me here.
Credits:
Cryono77 - Music
Krinkels - Madness Combat
mcfluidinium - For sprites
Me - For Sprite Sheet, created Testification, lel.
Man, I for once will do you a favor and give you an honest and helpful review, so you can become better.
Madness animations don't allow for much errors, because it is relatively low-effort genre already, making mistakes in it is not justifiable.
All of the mistakes you should be able to easily spot and correct:
- overall extremely choppy movement
- after protagonist kills first guy and gets to the left side of screen, he gets hiddenunder an animation mask for a moment
- when he gets to the end of the first hall the gun layer is unmasked and visible in front of the wall
- the guy that gets killed by the knife almost teleports to the floor instead of lfuently dropping dead
- the knife appearing from unexplained direction, doesn't make sense and is not a comedy twist
- something weird happens to the guys face right before he dies from a knife throw
This animation is terrible but I hope this review will make you progress.
Cheers and take care.
Amtemeri responds:
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind!
Edit: I tried fixing the Masking errors that I spotted during the making of this film is too damn hard to correct.
tbh you really put effort into this animation.i'm giving you 4 start too
Amtemeri responds:
Thank you!
i can understand that this is a short animation. 3.5 stars 4 effort