holy hell I'm not dead??
Sorry for the long delay, was enjoying my summer break of doing nothing a little too much :)
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It's a very interesting story, and the designs you made are also fantastic. But, I'm slightly blown off track by the voice. Just a bit. I don't really know how to improve in the voice, because I'm more of that "I know how to draw a guy extremely well!!" kind of guy. Maybe add a bit of ASMR to it? It keeps the popping in your mouth away, or that's what I heard. But, yeah. That's all that needs to be improved, add a bit more spiff to your tone. Other then that, you did beautifully.
I think I kinda get what you're saying, I will try something out. The next video will be uploaded in 2 weeks on my youtube channel, I would be happy if you could give me another feedback then :)