Great start! I look forward to seeing where this goes!
One thing I noticed, is when you meet Nastreya, she directs the player to the left, when it should say to the right.
Are you planning to continue to release the previous patron version to the public? I'd be interested to see how this is progressing. For the most part, I agree with Takai. The writing has some grammar errors and awkward wording, but the storyline sounds intriguing enough. I also liked that little things were found throughout the scenery as well, although I'm wondering why he doesn't balk at helping a dark elf. Dokalf (spelling?) are traditionally evil. Clear instructions, although it would be nice if there was a way for the player to view their current task somewhere in case they missed it. Easy to sort through your inventory, although I almost missed the fact that I already wearing armor and had a sword at the beginning. All in all a lot of potential here, and I'd be interested to see one of the already out of date versions that have been released since this one came out.
Good alpha, this has definite potential. The writing needs some improvement, there are some grammar errors and awkward wording, but I enjoyed the story. And the sex animations could be better (adding sound to them would be great, too). Also, I found a bug where the dripping sound effects from the old castle didn't go away after I left and was stuck with it in the background for the rest of the game. I really liked how there were little items scattered in barrels/desks/etc. everywhere, it gave me reason to check everything and there were enough items that it felt worth my time. I hope to see this get better and better and the game progresses!
Thank you so much for your feedback! I appeciate it! I'm sorry for the grammar errors, I'm not an english native language I try to do my best, but as soon as I can afford it, I'll hire some english native language person to check all the dialogues.
I hope You will like the future releases as well (or more) than this one!!
Thank you for your support!!!
failed to load data/Map006.json, i think i'll wait a bit till i try this game
What kind of browser are you using to open the game?
Game is pretty solid so fa, I can tell you put a lot of effort into creating the maps which is good but the towns felt pretty empty with not much to do, I also think you went a bit crazy with the barrels.
If I could suggest something else maybe give us choices when we talk to people even if it only changes what someone replies back.
Thank you for your suggestion! I hope you will like te future releases as well as this!