This video was very charming for your first. I found it quite entertaining and witty.
The audio was a bit of a problem because of the cracks, if you edit your audio with Audacity you might be able to fix that. (along with some of the script slips, it happens to everyone who doesn't have practice)
The animation is a good start, because, I mean, if you know what Eddsworld is, you may know how basic Edd's animations came out. (stick figures) And, well, before he died, his animations were really really good (in my opinion) especially compared to his first few animations.
Keep drawing and animating (and make sure to pick up animation tips!) and you'll end up in a good spot! (i mean, i should know, i'm an animator myself, and it doesn't start out easy, but try not to shy away from movement.) If you need any real-time animation tips, you can watch other's animations slowed down so you can see them frame by frame. It's helped me in the past, so I recommend you try it yourself sometime, maybe...

great work !

hey no owrries- my first video was litterally a stick figure running into a wall and exploding
( sadly it was on flipnote and i cant get remember my old account ... rest in peperoni or something )

if you maybe add a 2 frame per second look to the animation to give each still frame some animation flow- like subdle line differences in things or bobbing objects- it helps, beyond that just add a bit of color and art art over the sorta stick figure basic characters
It's nice but all i can say is a 3 with generosity, not to be a jerk just cant grade it for much ...
( me being up for a day and a half my slight snobby critic mode is still on sorry- i do love your video XD , also the first one, that's the mindset of a guy i knew ... that basically ruined my interest in naruto forever )