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It's ok. My biggest problem is the green guy is ugly as hell.

KattlarvKattlarv
Rated 2.5 / 5 starsJuly 25, 2017
Gotta say it's soso. The sounds aren't good. (in fact, they quickly become very annoying. I guess if you are into that type of noise, it might be okay or even good though)
It has some minor anatomy issues, like how the breasts move. Or, primarily the nipples. (Or how some items with notably no depth, are used in a angle they weren't made for.
It lacks a climax, especially how it tries to milk it. And then to just shift to a cumshot afterwards doesn't improve it much either. As, it had a clear build up to a climax, but then there was none. And then it just swapped to the male orgasm.
Still, it is pretty decent at least. You do get in a lot of "oomph" in it so to speak. With practice and learning where to allocate the effort, you could become great at this.
Could do with work on your female genitalia. It's currently okay compared to your male. Long as you don't spiral off with improving on it xP
But yeah, all and all, it's completely average.
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chill1208chill1208
Rated 4 / 5 starsJuly 24, 2017
nicely done
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GameDragonEXEGameDragonEXE
Rated 3.5 / 5 starsJuly 24, 2017
Compared to all the "demos" and "tests" that come "under judgement", this one is good. Spot on voice, timing and animation. Now what to do about this weird boner...
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ponchoman8ponchoman8
Rated 5 / 5 starsJuly 24, 2017
Wonderfully done.
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IanRichardsIanRichards
Rated 4.5 / 5 starsJuly 24, 2017
Nicely done but in my opinion it sounds to much like a real girl

Gotta say it's soso. The sounds aren't good. (in fact, they quickly become very annoying. I guess if you are into that type of noise, it might be okay or even good though)
It has some minor anatomy issues, like how the breasts move. Or, primarily the nipples. (Or how some items with notably no depth, are used in a angle they weren't made for.

It lacks a climax, especially how it tries to milk it. And then to just shift to a cumshot afterwards doesn't improve it much either. As, it had a clear build up to a climax, but then there was none. And then it just swapped to the male orgasm.
Still, it is pretty decent at least. You do get in a lot of "oomph" in it so to speak. With practice and learning where to allocate the effort, you could become great at this.
Could do with work on your female genitalia. It's currently okay compared to your male. Long as you don't spiral off with improving on it xP

But yeah, all and all, it's completely average.

nicely done

Compared to all the "demos" and "tests" that come "under judgement", this one is good. Spot on voice, timing and animation. Now what to do about this weird boner...