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Samus Aran to Zero Suit

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So i figured i would become more active on this site now that im officially enrolled into art school. This is my first attempt at animating and i know its extremely short though i wanted feedback if possible.

Also i know i need practice, but you have to start somewhere.

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Extremely short, but first efforts are often that way. It's very rough, but passable. Even with the crudeness of the sketches, you've included some nice details, like the suit's knee spikes, so it's obvious that you know the source material. It'd be nice to see you spend some more time on this exact thing and see how much you can improve it - cleaning up the line quality and adding more in-between frames and such. Good job, and keep practicing!


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theartofkc responds:

Thanks for the review! Im currently in school taking an animation class, hoping that i get better with the next submission. I also would like to come back to this submission at some point using the skills that ive learned and hopefully make it a lot better. Again, thanks for the criticism i appreciate it!!


Well it was a bit too short to really give any criticism but it wasn't a bad effort. The initial part of the animation looked pretty smooth but it got sort of messy when she changed into the zero suit. I also noticed she seemed to change size a few times, I suppose that's something you could work on to make the final product look cleaner. Not really sure why this has such a low rating, keep at it!


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theartofkc responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the advice. i will make sure that i spend more time on the overall animation so that the quality doesn't drop. I also added the size change to try and show the camera focusing in, though i see it didn't really translate well. Thanks for the review i will be sure to get better from here!!

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1.33 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 20, 2017
3:00 AM EDT
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