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♪ The Afterlust ♪

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Update: Holy Shit 1,000 views and daily 4th place! Thanks so much!!

Thank you so much, Finn M-K for letting me use your song for this music video!
Check Finn M-K out
http://finnmk.newgrounds.com/
https://soundcloud.com/finnmk
https://www.youtube.com/c/FinnMK
https://www.facebook.com/FinnMKMusic
https://finnmk.bandcamp.com/
http://www.finnmk.com/

Do you want your music video animated? contact me or PM me! Email - musicdazzledyt@gmail.com

I would also like to thank Mclelun for letting me use some of his background art! - http://www.mclelun.com/

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very basic quality animation, improvements could be made here and there.
most of the backgrounds just look like screenshots from anime movies or games, which isn't that creative imho.

its at least good to change the way they look a little if they are pre-rendered backgrounds, even throwing a tree in and fading it to match could be an improvement in background quality!
basic character outlines are a good thing to practice with but i wouldn't use them in an actual animation personally, they just look weird. practice makes perfect!



Well I understand the concept but it wasn't quite there. I must say that Mclelun makes incredible art and FinnMK did an awesome song but your characters combined with all this doesn't fit in my opinion. If you did more movements in the animation like when they are holding hands it would give a better feeling into it.

You did spend your time to put all of this together but keep in mind for the future that if you use high quality material, you must keep up the rest of it to make a solid profit. That's all from me!

Keep on doing a great job!



I was liking the visuals and I was following along with the song until I got distracted by a typo on your end. "That we walked in different places," should be "paces." My biggest gripe is that it seems you didn't do your due diligence in analyzing the song while animating. Based on the lyrics, it isn't about losing a lover through a death, but rather it is a mutual understanding that lovers eventually drift apart, i.e. merely a break-up.



the background scenes and the forefront characters are so different in a jarring way.


VivendmaYoutube responds:

It is a style of mine! I think it looks good! :)


This video is a jewel hidden in a mountain of good things. This has many feelings, and that's what I like to find more often in the judgement section: good projects made from people wih a lot of talent.
I really liked the story, and the video has a 10/10 quality, but the fat prize was for the beautiful song (important part in this video). I don 't know anything about FinnMK, but I congratulate him because this was a really professional composition, hope he can scale to greatness in his compositor career :D
Thanks both of you, Finn and Vivendma, both have many talent, and I think you should be more noticed, by more people. Keep awesome bros :D


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Views
2,241
Faves:
5
Votes
174
Score
3.46 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 19, 2017
3:21 PM EDT
Genre
Music Video
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  • Daily 4th Place July 21, 2017