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Scuinox is a mysterious human in the future who ventures to different planets.
These are ok, however, I do have some suggestions for improvement.
These have a little bit of a story, but not much. You could add a lot of content to it to make it more interesting.
Also, you need to refine your pacing and cut out parts where nothing's happening. For example, when he approaches a planet, and when he leaves, he stops and doesn't move for about 8 seconds, when he could pause for one or two, or not even stop at all. When he enters the cave, the camera focuses on the top of the mountain for about 8 seconds, and there's no activity, and really no point for that shot. In animation, there should always be something happening. Still scenes should be kept as short as possible.
When anyone is speaking, lower the music volume so they're easier to hear and understand.
And, when attempting lip syncing, don't talk slower; animate faster! No one talks like that. If the mouth is too slow for the words, then speed up the mouth rather than slowing the speech.
These are ok, but if there's no improvement from episode to episode, you will start to lose the interest of your viewers.
Thanks for the advice I appreciate it. I'm new to animating and I thought I'd share these.
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