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My first ever animation using adobe after effects and flash, did this for a college project, so honest feedback is appreciated, hope you enjoy!
The audio mixing is all over the place, your voice overs sound a bit static-y so there may have been some problems with your mic, coloring is a bit sloppy (you can see at some points it looks like you used a fill tool to color some things in, and there's a bit of negative space at the edges that aren't fully colored), and some of the animations aside from tweening are a little stiff (the walking animation), and the text for the title cards are misaligned.
Writing was the strong point though. Particularly, the joke introducing the lag was pretty funny.
I appreciate the feedback, i personally thought the writing was the weakest point, but glad you got some laughs out of it, the static was actually added on to give it that 40's/50's audio ascetic, however due to the time crunch i was on i forgot to add it in for rest of movie, so it seems out of place, anyway as for your other points, I'll be sure to improve on them in the future
an animation about the /v/ board on 4chan.
When the lazyboy cannot be lazy…
Dinosaurs are cool
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