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A boy sits in his room one night while a mysterious stranger lurks near by.

This is just a stupid horror attempt. I tried to experiment with audio so I recommend using headphones.

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This one made me chuckle real good! So simple, yet so effective. I really like your short horror projects. Keep em coming!

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it! There will be another 15 second one coming at the end of this month!

Thought I'd see your older works, And I must say your older works Are alot better then the.... Whatever the big bang theory one was.
This one just starts off with A slow approach.
I'd have to say the animation quality is Great, Not the best but it's good enough to watch.
The guy just sits there, looking at the Computer screen Not even acknowledging what's happening, I'd say that's pretty funny.
Suddenly, blood! He Still doesn't know what's happening, That's funny too!
And then nothing happened the End
Overall:4.5 Stars
Really great little short and Funny while we are at it
Also some horror things I don't know

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I agree the big bang theory one is terrible, I just wanted to get something done and try get an understanding of some different softwares. My next work will be better with some more effort put in.

Not much going on to review, but if you wanted to make this piece better I'd suggest making the light coming from the door more dynamic. The light fills part of the room in the direction of the man on the computer so it should light his back up similar to the computer screen. And when the blood starts spilling the light is covered up once again until it goes away.

Little details like that tend to sell "believe-ability" which sounds dumb for a cartoon, but really means engaging the viewer.

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thanks for the feedback, this is something I completely missed and I am glad you pointed out. In future work I will keep this in mind. Thank you!

Awesome :D

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thank you :)

I liked it, in fact it made me laugh good work. Keep it up.

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thanks for the response, it's very motivating!

Credits & Info

3.50 / 5.00

Jun 2, 2017
5:37 PM EDT
Comedy - Original