Not bad, but your tweening and general animation needs improvement. But keep at it, with time and a bit of effort you should improve further and further
A teenager struggles with his computer when rendering a scene and when he thinks he has no more time to conclude his project, the time stops.
This is a final college project that is sort of a trailer for an idea for a short movie.
Not bad, but your tweening and general animation needs improvement. But keep at it, with time and a bit of effort you should improve further and further
Yeah, this is my first 3D animation and I'll keep improving.
Thanks for the feedback, it is very helpful to know what people out there think.
Thanks,
Vanessa
Promising start. No real meat to the story though. I think you have a future in animation for sure but my advice is to put a bit more time into each animation and to flesh out the story. Still, at first you had me hooked, and I was curious to see what happened. Keep putting effort and I am sure it will work out for you.
-Warmest regards
timeattack
Thanks, yeah, I noticed the story was not clear.
Thank you for your feedback it is very helpful!
-Vanessa