Man, I love this! The animation is pretty neat, and it has a lot of potential, like, you should consider expanding this.
There's clearly a lot of effort that went into this short film. It is a complete package, as far as shorts go. The color palate is great and shows a decent understanding of mood. That being said, it has shortcomings that can only be dealt with by improving your skills at writing, draftsmanship, and animation. The character designs may have been just a tad too detailed for your current skill sets, but regardless, good job.
preety good. not like the other shitposts or goofy films on newgrounds.
things i liked. things that should improve.
-the setup -the voice acting (just a little)
Otherwise its still good 4.5 stars.
not the ending i was expecting :O but all the more reason to love it! would love to maybe see a continuation of sorts.