three stars because you're good at storytelling and it kept my attention but otherwise it would've gotten 1.5/5
It's okay to not have super fancy art or animation but at least put some effort into the quality of the drawings. Little things like cleaning up the lines and keeping them the same weight, choosing a stronger color pallet and adding even one or two more in betweens to the animations could really transform the overall package.
You have a talent for youtube style storytelling so keep it up i'd just put more effort into the overall presentation.