Good stuff, but some audio would be nice. Also, why is there no cum shot.
eh its a good start but why did you need to use unity for this? you could have gotten same result as a flash though I don't know much about those things I can see the quality or whatever is about the same but still I hope you imporove and add on to this I can tell it has potental
I answered your question in my journal. You may check it out if you're still curious about it.
Wow, what an improvement! Glad you are heading in the right direction.
Purely playing the critic:
Her right knee is off, the smoothness of the curve bubbles
The guy's elbow is all sorts of wrong
Her pubs look like mountains
the seam of her left knee is too long
The guy's body is completely static.
The shadow on her butt doesn't look right
her right boob is bigger than the left (animation should be symmetrical, real life isn't)
On the fast eye rolling animation her hair moves abruptly.
Provided purely for improvements. It is very good and much nicer than the previous style of Summoner's Quest, but I almost like the older style better, i guess the burr is a bit signature.
Love the animation, Just wish the art style was better. you don't see much animated Ashi