I like it so far; it has potential. The art is very nicely done, as are the timing of the sound effects. The music is also nice, if a little repetitive.
It was quite annoying clicking to read through the text. But on the other hand, consider it a testament to your ability to tell a good story that I kept going to find out the rest of the story. Perhaps you might revise it in a later version to progress more quickly or with fewer clicks, i.e. a whole "screen" at a time between clicks. The English in the game seems to have a large number of small errors. Assuming you are not a native speaker, you might want to have someone proofread it for you, as the text is a very large part of the game.
I did enjoy it though, and look forward to your future work. ~Arceus