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Very good, looking forward very much to the next episode. Did you draw all the artwork yourself? It's really beautiful.
I would kindly suggest you might want to go over the text a bit more or have someone help you to make it a bit more polished, though. Text is an important part of this piece and I saw a few spelling mistakes and misuse of you're/your. Cleaning those up would help it look more professional. If you're not a native speaker or need any help, feel free to ask.
I appreciate the feedback, I'm try to keep to a schedule of one per-week. But work makes that pretty hard to do :u I will endeavour to do better on next episodes.
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