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The unexpected fighting

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Hi pls don't make a review with swearing and this is my first animation I hope you enjoy and its going to be fun also pls check out my youtube channel name GazerD Great you will see my face there and goodbye

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Wich program do you used to make this animation?

GazerDGreat responds:

Sticknodes check it out on play store or app store mine is the pro version

Low quality stick fight, with limited backdrops, grainy characters and terrible sound effects. It gets a star as it at least has some length to it, but improvements are needed

This wasn't too bad actually, if this is really your first animation, then you're off to a good start! The animations looked pretty decent and the fight was OK too ( I guess), but you should make the characters react to the attacks a bit more, especially when the guy with the sword was on the ground or in the air getting sliced up by the white stickman, he was just standing there not reacting to the attacks at all as if he was just a part of the background. Also, the sound effects a bit too repetitve.
Also, I think you should try to add more details to the background. Also, I think you should make the attacks look a bit more realistic. Also... ehm forget it. Just know, that this is a good start :^)

GazerDGreat responds:

Thnx for the tips I'm making part two

Credits & Info

Views
956
Votes
85
Score
1.88 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 20, 2017
5:21 AM EDT
Genre
Action