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DOLLS PLAY - Episode 1.1

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rated 1.94 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Parody
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yvonne
dark-comedy
dolls-play
pandemomium

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May 9, 2017 | 3:42 PM EDT

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Episode 1.1

Having completely forgotten about her daughters birthday, Yvonne speeds to the Toy Store, at the last minute.
All the while finding herself victim to an unwanted cold call.
Its not long before both speeding, and taking a call lands Yvonne in trouble with the police...

How she handles the situation, gives us just a Taste of how truly Sadistic she can be...

Episode 1.2 coming soon
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Reviews


LiCuLiCu

Rated 3 / 5 stars

The first thing i thought about while watching this is how good this could be with a higher framerate. Also the characters and backgrounds could have some more shades/light effects. Apart from that it's pretty good.
About the sound, be sure to put the highest sound quality when saving the project. Some programs have it at minimum by default.


RyzoJ89 responds:

Thanks. Really appreciate the feedback. I totally agree about the shading, I started shading with the police guy in this, but i am focusing more on it in episode 1.2.
I literally started animating 2 months ago so I've got a lot to learn, lol but I just wondered what u meant by a higher frame rate?


ZornuzkullZornuzkull

Rated 2 / 5 stars

The voice acting and sound quality needs work so does the animation...
I've seen worse...


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RyzoJ89 responds:

I'll totally take that. Lol
Im capable of better voice acting, i promise i will do better next time Zornuz lol

I know the animation needs a lot o' work, but what specifically would u change, baring in mind ive litterally started animating less than 2 months ago haha


HarleyJinn93HarleyJinn93

Rated 5 / 5 stars

LOVE THIS!! So much better than the first one, could do with some background noise like a car door closing, the window rolling down, the sound of the siren when the cop shows up,etc but great progress from your first! Cant wait for the next episode! does she make it to the toy store?!


RyzoJ89 responds:

Thanks so much for ur feedback. She does! haha