can i help animate
What happens when your rival comes along? You battle!
It's been almost a year since the first episode, uploaded on my old newgrounds account, but here it is now, before the offical YouTube release!
I plan to release two more episodes this year, but then again, it took me an entire year to muster up the motivation to make this version. Ending may be a little long thanks to the YT End Screen annotations, I'll make a separate version next time.
I'm also not a good singer.
CREDITS:
Go Cart - Drop Mix Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com)
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Pokemon Theme Not mine either, duh.
can i help animate
While this submission is not that bad or anything, it's really not that enjoyable either. The art and line work can really use a lot more improvement in my opinion. Maybe having outlines in the backgrounds for example. I mean, this wouldn't be a big issue if the animation was at least smooth and looking good. But even the animation is pretty stiff for the most part. Granted there is lip-syncing (which is not bad by the way), and some movements in the characters. But still, there should be a lot more movement than that. Especially in the song sequence, it was basically just a slideshow. Any submission under judgement should never be a slideshow. Not to mention the voice acting half the time was too quiet. Learn to amplify the voices so they are loud and clear. Don't take it the wrong way, I mean you do have some talent here that has potential. You just need to improve on the overall quality of your work because it is really lacking in certain parts. I hope you take my advice, and try to get better. Good luck!
Thanks for the feedback! I'm still learning, and if you've seen the first episode, there's a massive improvement. I know this one has a lot of flaws, but granted I had a limited deadline, there wasn't much I could do. I'll take your advice about sounds and movements, thanks.