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Blockhead Ben - Pilot

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Wow what a great way to begin the summer.

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Looks like you had been studying Eddsworld to a T. Awesome job!

Goodie

Very good animation and I liked the over all comedy and story!

Where did u get all those sound effects

BenToons responds:

uh... internet

Ben, I just want to say that this is very mediocre, and you can do a lot better than this. I'm not trying to discourage you from making Bentoons or anything in general. The fact that you spent three years on this and kept going anyway is impressive. I have cartoons from a few months ago that I can't even be bothered to finish. But at the same time you went along with making a mediocre Eddsworld clone with Ren and Stimpy sound effects. You can do so much better than this, Ben. I'm pretty sure that even you can admit that this isn't your best effort. Not everyone's first cartoon is a masterpiece, but this seems like you decided to go along with it just for the sake of having a cartoon out rather than having something your proud of. Now, To be fair, maybe you are proud of this. But I just want to help you out and tell you what you need to improve on: First of all, Make the characters personalities a lot more visible. I can barely tell any of these guys apart. Secondly, improve the dialogue and voice acting. It feels very wooden and bland. Finally, improve the colors. Explore outside the typical primary colors. make the colors slightly more duller (or brighter). It depends on the scene.

I don't know if, but I think I kinda see some eddsworld influense in this. And that doesn't make it bad, because this film is awesome! Good job man.

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Uploaded
May 5, 2017
6:41 PM EDT
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