The sound of the guy bumping into her shouldn't be in there as he doesn't make any contact to her that would create such a noise.
Yeah, it is what it is... Still not going to beat you up for a loop. You've got reasonable technique and you added audio. Still building on basics, but you get the point across. So... I'd call that a success.
The sounds, btw, are hilarious. :o) It's kind of refreshing to see someone put together good work and still not take themselves or the creation too seriously.
Don't forget to breathe, relax, and keep on keeping on.
Thank you for the reply :D Any ideas how to make sound not that weird? I still got no clue of how should it sound like and where to find good examples. Even my friends can't give me definite advices xd
looks like a mission success to me <3
Pretty nice but it feels like it should've been uploaded on rule34 and not here.