GREAT JOB!
Ozcar I thought this was a great submission. Ban me another 5 days...pweease.
Author Comments
This is my firts animation in flash, and it's the history about Erick and Koko. Ericka really dislikes her sister Koko, but she don't knows than her sis is her clone. "Two equal poles repel themselves" but, sometimes, makes an explotion. The original one was make on spanish, this is the version spanish-english. This is the Chapter # 1 (Soon # 2) I hope you'll enjoy it.
clean it up
first off know how to write english before you make an animation in english. because there were so many mistakes it was hard to comprehend at times. don't make a second one please! at least until you learn english and have some kind of story in mind.
i agree with TyleJones
i mean, put some effort into it, make a english version, make the steps proper, and, for god's sake, make a damn story line. I didnt even watch it all it was so bad. Sorry mahn, but u gotta try some.
I have been watching you movies
I've enjoyed all of your movies, they are all very orginal. Nicely done.
Very nice!
I thought this was an excellent first movie! Well done! I also thought the voice acting was great and the little girl was so cute (especially her laugh). The only issue: the grammatical errors with the English sub-titles. There were quite a lot. I probably should have learned Spanish. Era perezoso en escuela! :-)