I really liked your voice acting.
The story is an interesting idea.
Ok character designs.
It'd be better if you had some more detailed backgrounds in your video.
The animation really needs improvement and needs to be more complex.
Come on down children! You know youll have a good time eat some comically named food from some guy who is vampirelike in appearance! Or dont life doesnt has no meaning and i dont care anymore!
I really liked your voice acting.
The story is an interesting idea.
Ok character designs.
It'd be better if you had some more detailed backgrounds in your video.
The animation really needs improvement and needs to be more complex.