It's ok. I'd suggest making the guy's mouth move, and adding some panel that gives the ship's voice a character. There's plenty of space on the control panel to add some flashing character light for the computer's voice. Having no mouth movement and no characters identifier for the ship leaves the story bland and lacking substance. :|
Granted, this may be the last episode for the ship(?), but I hope to see these changes in the future. It'll add more substance to the animation.