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Norman and sho s1e1

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Apr 3, 2017 | 5:30 AM EDT

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norman is a 20 year old male who watches tv as much as he can and is forced to go on adventures with his friend/room mate sho.

sho loves adventures and wants to go on lots
sho did not speak as much as he will in the new episodes as he didn't need to speak in this one but he will have more words soon

Description of episode
norman and sho go to the berry farm and norman is bitten by a bug and goes to the doctors to find out his going to die but a guy outside says there is a cure at the wizards place so norman and sho go to the wizards castle but the wizard has almost run out so he tells them to get him a new staff so they go to the evil wizards place and have a dance off to win the staff they win and go to the other wizard but he has used the last of the cure and they go back to their home but see the troll blood is the cure and norman lives.
the end lol

the chase sound
alone the song at the start and end

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I love animations i have since i was just a baby and have started learning how to make them i try to make funny animations or life stories. i have been working on them for a long time and have made my own style. i loved superheroes and they are what inspired me to start drawing.
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Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not bad man theres a lot you could improve on though. Your biggest strength is that you're thinking a lot about shot composition and framing which is pretty good.

Your art style could be a lot cleaner though and I'd spend more time making a set of mouths for each sound that looks really clean so that lip synch is taken care of from the beginning since you're using a lot of it.

As far as shading I'd think about light source, which is going to usually by diagonally from above like the sun or a light in the room. Right now your shading looks like it's coming from the left or right.

Also you have a lot of lines intersecting things where they shouldn't you might wanna think about cleaning up. Also just using less heavy lines in general.

The voice acting could also use work.

Lastly I'd try to cut your next cartoon down about half the length. Even the title screen was there for about twice along as it needed to be.

Keep practicing!

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KaboomAnimationz responds:

thanks for your tips i will try to fix up my animation :)