I see what you were trying to do, but it seems it is just you making commentary on a clip from a shitty movie and it just isn't funny to me. The voice acting was mediocre, the animation was low effort (more than half of the movie was just static with commentary?) and the drawings left something more to be desired.

Instead of just having the character say the movie he is watching sucks, give the audience a reason as to why he feels that way? It wasn't immediately clear from the clips themselves that you were showing what made the flick he was watching so bad. Especially if you haven't seen the John Travolta movie in question.