PAPERTHIN: Rebels (Chapter 4)

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Hey Guys... this is Chapter 4 of PAPERTHIN: Rebels.
Here the assasin is defeated and Detective Chima goes deeper into the mystery that came with the email he received months back.

Done in OpenToonz and Blender 2.78


This is pretty good. My only real pet peeve is the low frame rate of the animations. It would be nice to see a little more detail. Nice work overall, though.

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AguRex responds:

Thanks. I started the animation late and wanted to finish it on time. Thanks for the feedback though.

Great animation man, like how you split the text messages across the screen and color coded it. Feel like you need better transitions and audio was a little wonky. Animation was clean, and clean toons too!

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AguRex responds:

Yeah I hope to improve my audio Editting skills. Thanks a lot.

Have yet to see the other episodes but animation is great and the way you do the lighting is really nice to look at:)

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AguRex responds:

Thank you. ^_^

Awesome work! The style of key frame pose animation works really well with the fighting. You really know how to create believable motion in a few frames.

My only suggestion would be a frame or two of gentle ease for less extreme actions like moving their arm to another position. It looks choppy at that point because the motion is a lot slower.

Great work

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AguRex responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I'll make the adjustments . Hope I have enough time though. Thanks a lot.

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3.63 / 5.00

Mar 28, 2017
9:06 PM EDT
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