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Techwarrior infiltrates base with his enemies and tries to kill boss.
See what happends :D
The same AAGHH all the time.
This might be long but Who cares =l
The First scene is fine just the Robot "flying" is BAD not saying the flames are bad, they are the best/smoothest thing in the intire animation :T side note why did you use the same sound 11 times? 11! you could have asked Djjaner,Johny or someone else. plus you could've made the sound quality better just adding that in. Why I'm giving a 2.5 and not a 1 is because you CAN Improve I KNOW you can just practice k? k! :D
Ok let´s do this:
Well on first look and first scene it was ok i liked the effects of the fire and it looked much smoother than other scenes. But then the first killing scene was poor to be honest with you: No lines at shooting, No blood effects and Poor quality of blood scarfs.
The main problem is the repeating sound of dying, it KEEPS repeating over and over again.
You did not put any blood to the walls and it looked unsatisfying for me.
The reason that gave you 3 starz is that your animation looks bit smoother than the previous ones
My honest review
Please, tell me that this is not overrated by MadCzech itself.
Let's review this, because it gives for a looong text.
Ok, let's start with you, let's say that you don't have any ideas, you are just copying what Djjaner does, making your animations boring and trying just because you try to imitate Djjaneros' animating style and not defining your own and making things already seen and even more boring.
Let's talk about the animation: It looks really bad honestly, you don't even try to make it not wooby. It looks like you animated the whole animation in one day and with no effort and revising the frames.
The masking looks horrible when the protagonist kills some guy with the sword, it looks like you didn't even revise your scenes. Gravities are stupid, even when he kills the giant unit, the techwarrior doesn't even use his jetpack, or when he kills the boss too.
The rooms are boring. The whole movie is linear, you don't even see stairs or good decoration. You just see that there's a whole building but with only 5 rooms, you could add a door to other rooms or something like that even if the protagonist wasn't going to go through those doors. The whole decoration is cases, signs, and some other tables in the boss room.
Let's talk about the character and reactions. We all know from watching ryder revenge that the TechWarrior had an armour that protected him very well, but you made him really OP, and the reactions were too slow to attack him. Like for example the moment that he kills the giant unit, the other guy does nothing with his sword, he was just moving and not even trying to attack the protagonist.
The sound effects are in low quality, and you can easily put them in high quality. You used the same death sound effect over and over, and yeah, we know you didn't have another one, but dude, be a little smart and ask someone like Djjaner if he could give to you some other death sounds instead of using the same sound 11 FUCKING TIMES in a 2 minute animation.
Well, I think that's all, I'll give it a 1/10 for boring and wooby animation, bad sound effects, not trying to imitate Djjaner, and more that I already explained.
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