(i had task, to animate some one throwing a fishing rod, what was really important was the movement of the wire, the point of the task was to understand the movement of dragged wire. I thought okey, but i could something more. So through pure improvisation during the process i came up with this I rushed it, this was in a week. Leave your thoughts please on what you think of this. Personally i think this reaally lacks a proper ending.)
This is old description
I have decided to make a normal for this cartoon, i also changed the name to something less corny
Notbad at all
I really like this especially that main character was pretty detail and was very good with emotions and I like the animation here and the stroty it really drives it from start to the end and honestly didn't find anything that needed any changes
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly didn't find anything that needed any major changes pretty solid if you ask me
~X~
Reminds me of those silly old Looney Tunes cartoons cause of the silly humor. Though the character designs and animation should improve more.
lol, well not bad, though feels like the main character is a bit too expressive in his expression. Does feel a bit reminiscent of old cartoons, but feels like it's a bit too much for a guy just standing in the same place all the time. Usually there's motion between the motions, you know? Just seems weird he keeps expressing himself in such a stationary way, in the same place all the time, for such a long time. I like the joke, but the expressionism drags it on a bit. Keep it going!
-cd-
In terms of narrative it could have been much more concise, there was a lot of nothing much happening.
Animation is pretty gucci though, there were a lot of bits I liked, they just had a lot of nothing in between.
Some of the sound was a little out of place too, it could have just been me but I didn't really understand why there were so many dog growls/barks. The growls I could sorta understand from a comedic point of view but the rest I just didn't 'get'.
With a bit of polish and more concise structure I can see you making some great content!
Then he elevated into the universe looking for glass.