The final customer enters a Nopekia store.
Accepted into the Animattikon Project film festival.
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Very nice work
This was some very nice work the animation was very smooth the idea was really well done and some good story ideas here was very well done with a nice flow of quality here and I honestly can't find anything that would really make this better as it's pretty solid of an animation and congrats on all the awards that's pretty nice stuff anyways keep up the good work
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it's perfect
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If You Clean You Lines up you can definitely submit this to Nickelodeon Or Cartoon Network
other than that
GREAT WORK MAN
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Thanks man! I checked out the video. It's looking nice. Especially the artwork.
I think the biggest thing that would help you is some basic eases and a couple more keyframes in each shot. For example, when the girl is shaking her ass at 0:52. The ass shaking is only 2 frames. You have a frame when it's tilted to the right and a frame where it's tilted to the left. if you doubled that to 4 frames and added a frame where it's almost fully tilted to the right but not quite and a frame where it's almost fully tilted to the left it would make the animation much smoother without that much more work.
If you did that for all your movements your animation would look twice as clean without too much more effort.
Keep it up!
After seeing your previous animation I had to see another and what do you know, it's great. I think it may be a bit less polished, but that's only because your art style was definitely going in a different direction in this video. I love the fluidity of the animations and the flat colors really made standout colors well, standout! Keep giving it your all man, love the content.
Would get 5 stars if I was on acid. I'm not on acid but it doesn't matter.
my hero!
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