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Hope's Boat Ride (PILOT PART 2)

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rated 2.18 / 5 stars
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Experimental
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adventure
animation
episode
graphic

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Mar 12, 2017 | 10:37 PM EDT

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Hope is leaving another island when he meets up with this strange man.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good sound quality. Nice voice acting. Good use of ambiance and sound fx. Interesting camera angle at 42 sec and appropriate since it's from the character's pov. Story went a little too fast though. I couldn't figure out why the character in the overalls flipped his attitude so quickly and decided to join the protagonist at the end with no explanation.

Artwork could obviously improve but I get that animating is tricky. If you have have the capability try playing around with different brushes to add some texture - especially with the background and you'll see a huge difference. Also you could use different mouth shapes for phonetic sounds: I find this diagram to be extremely helpful and simple http://orig06.deviantart.net/a793/f/2009/079/f/7/phoneme_mouth_chart_by_cartoonistwill.png

Additionally if you add eyebrows to your characters it will make it far easier to articulate their expressions.