Crow eye animation at the beginning is a nice attention getter but then it takes too long for the rest of the intro to get started. You want your audience to know what the show is about as quickly as possible because peoples' attention spans are SHORT. Perhaps cut the part after the eye leading up to the narration so that you keep that interest rolling without any breaks. Also, love narrator's voice but it's kind of hard to hear.
The show is very much, if not too familiar to Hellbenders. Although, your interpretation does look fairly interesting and I'd love to see how this pans out when you complete it.
Good luck with future epsiodes!
This actually looks quite interesting
Can't wait to see it
Rip off of Zack and Chris...