Crow eye animation at the beginning is a nice attention getter but then it takes too long for the rest of the intro to get started. You want your audience to know what the show is about as quickly as possible because peoples' attention spans are SHORT. Perhaps cut the part after the eye leading up to the narration so that you keep that interest rolling without any breaks. Also, love narrator's voice but it's kind of hard to hear.

The show is a bit too familiar to Hellbenders. Your interpretation does look kinda cool though itd be cool to see how this pans out when you complete it.
Good luck

This actually looks quite interesting
Can't wait to see it

Rip off of Zack and Chris...