The game is interesting, but there are some serious problems that need to be addressed.
- For the second choice where you can continue trying to save the rest of the factory workers, if you go in the elevator, die soon after getting on, and then try and go back to that spot, the elevator will not have come back down, making it impossible to continue down this path.
- For the "boss battle" where you just got the laser gun, if you use up the laser gun without killing the boss, you can't reload it so it is impossible to kill the boss (even dying doesn't reset the ammo).
There may very well be other problems so I'd suggest going through the game again to see for yourself.
As for the gameplay, I enjoyed moving forward through the game, but it seemed like things happened without explanation, like the train separating. I was focusing on killing the enemies only to find the train moving apart when I got to that point. Also, killing enemies just wasn't very satisfying as it didn't provide me with anything, but an arbitrary score (if the enemies provided me with ammo or health, it would give me incentive to fight them, otherwise, I'd try and avoid them). Also, relating to that point, the combat is lacking and kind of annoying; if you try to attack standing still, but then move slightly, it cancels the animation and attack, causing the enemy to hit you.
I will say the game isn't awful and I would certainly like the play the rest of it. I hope to see more games from you in the future. Good luck!
(by the way, you say in the description "if you want to join me on my quest please contact me", what would you need help doing?)