I'm not going to say anything about the art and style. I will say the plot and storytelling were rushed, and the video cut out near the end, which isn't attractive.
This waas almost regrettable and if I wasn't determined, I would have gave up on this. I hope you can enjoy this, as it wasn't always fun to make this but I felt as if this hard work and sweat was worth it.
I'm not going to say anything about the art and style. I will say the plot and storytelling were rushed, and the video cut out near the end, which isn't attractive.
Probably you are a beginner but hey is all right. One thing that you nailed perfectly is the voice acting...that one of many things even an animator with experience fails to do...good job.