The Re-design Crisis

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In this episode of Monkey Wrench everyone gets re-designed! Follow Platanoz and his friends as they learn about Character Design, Persistence of Vision, and ancient artifacts like the zoetrope

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I really, really liked the character designs, it shows you put a great deal of effort into them...but sadly I don't think the same amount of effort was put into the script and animation.
The animation was a little too stiff. The camera angles need to be a little more dynamic to keep the interactions from being too boring, and the script...well, it was not very memorable to say the least.

All in all, a nice job, but it could've been better.

This was clever! You did a great job with the characters, the narrative, and the voices. I think it was a delight and it makes me want to watch the other episodes.

Pretty interesting vid, and ofc Austinn sounds awesome as always! :D

I didn't know what to expect at first, but this turned into a very interesting and fun video!

I love the scene where Bill suddenly stands close to the camera and it takes a moment to focus on him! Everything is well explained and I had a good laugh!

The only criticism that I could have is that they often stand idle when talking or move at the exact same time. You could make them nod sometimes to keep some motion going and avoid that the characters do nothing for too long.

Overall good animation and lyp syncing! Keep it up! I enjoyed it a lot!


Platanoz responds:

Thanks for watching. Glad you enojyed it :)

Very imformative, i actually learned alot from this :) also im difging the new art style :)

Platanoz responds:

Thanks, man.

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3.55 / 5.00

Mar 7, 2017
9:24 AM EST
  • Daily 2nd Place March 8, 2017