One. The Spike on the far right isn't colored. Two. Sound effects aren't the best. Three. Solid Animation, some choppy parts. But overall good job.
Oh yeah, this seems a lot like Alan Becker :P
I didnt planned to upload it first since i only wanted to test my new tablet
Pretty solid animation. Just two things.
1. This should be rated T. There's blood.
2. The spikes on the right aren't colored.
i will fix the rating now