The art style is a bit odd, but i don't really find any other problems with this other than the mic being a bit bad. But it's still pretty good.
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The art style is a bit odd, but i don't really find any other problems with this other than the mic being a bit bad. But it's still pretty good.
The mic thing might actually be a sound effect we used to simulate blowing wind (as you often hear in this shitty low budget commercials). I can understand why you thought it was just low quality though. I don't actually remember if it was recorded before or after we got our studio mic.
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Pretty good
thanks mang, we have a whole backlog we'll be getting put up in the next few days