Really cool

I really liked this game mainly for the story of it cause the story really sets the pace of things and I do like the rpg style of I personally think that gives it some more pazazz to it and makes for a really good game I would love for an update on this and have some sort of medal addition with the game concept the medals would really do good in a game Like this

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Some added medals would be a real big plus on this type of game

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I know my review is "fautastic"

Spifffidy-doo! The camel! it's THE CAMELLLLLLLLLLLLL!

It has a great concept of story telling, but i though it was really lazy to use rpg maker for this game. The mood only sets in slyghtly, because rpg games with such small details don't give the necessary dimmension to the story, if you had done it in a different manner, designing your own style and things like this it would have been a really intense game, it just didn't cut it for me.
The ability to decide the sentences would really fit with some design made from you, giving the text a blood writing and such, but instead it's just plain rpg maker text.

I kinda like this. and retro-styled rpg. It's simple but it could have done with some more content. Firstly I did think that the whole screen shaking was unnecessary but it gave a small vibe to the story. The cut scene transitions were a bit long in seconds to as a supposed fast paced rpg read about. I think you should do something else with the smae elements here but try to minimize certain things like slowness of the game. Good job on the other hand.