Nice. I liked the dialogue and the concept. The animation was fine, although I feel it was a little awkward in some places. The ending could have had a stronger punch-line, but the high five was fine. Overall, I liked it. Good job.
the animation was very nice and smooth had a nice flow to it .
I don't know why but that little high five part made me giggly.
I don't know why but I honestly really like this short and the animation was very good. The mic quality isn't bad as well. The only complaint I really have is that the volume of one the sound effects was a little too loud so you might wanna make sure your sounds aren't too loud.
Thanks! I did most of the audio in audacity, but added a bit in flash. I'm pretty new to working with audio in flash, so I wasn't quite sure how to change it. I have to reupload it anyway because of the music, so I'll see what I can do about the sound effects as well.
Joe Cartoon wanna be. Please be more creative and original with your art. A simple addition of originality would ameliorate your current situation and transcend your work into a world of appreciation.