Show, don't tell.
The Mouse creates a creation and soon it tries to destroy the Mouse! Which will win? Find out!
Show, don't tell.
Imitators of Animator Vs. Animation are a dime a dozen, but yours isn't too bad. The visuals look kind of cheap and your grammar is VERY off in places, but the script shows lots of potential.
Well, this is my first animation.. :)
Thanks :D
Soy el primer comentario XDDD