This is different
Well theres a number of things you can do to make this better but I think the number one thing you can do to improve onto this would be to make it longer and much more content. but you did piece together a nice little animation here eventhough it seems more like an intro of some sort, still kinda nifty.
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I think the number one thing you can do to improve onto this would be to make it longer and much more content.
Not a decent video in my opinion. Try harder next time.
Alright, I read that this took you six months to make, but come on. The entire duration of the video is 38 seconds, and the intro cards and credits total 36 seconds.
I waited 23 seconds, blinked and missed more than half of it.