Animation is weird and feels..overly smooth. The story is odd and all over the place, the grammar without punctuation and stuff seems like something made by an edgy kid that makes shitty sonic ocs, I know that seems like hate, but that's all i can really describe it as. The animation fails, as the rock just stops, as if it's in slow motion, before its hit up in the air. And they just fight..for no reason. Actions when involving other people or objects are delayed, and everything is slow. It also looks like a rookie pivot project except overly smooth, and, why do their blasts look like dicks? You can improve by making the animation in sync, so that means no delays like if a character throws an object back to another, a better story that isn't just..randomness, and better art, like more detailed blasts.