That twist. XD For a first impression this had impressively clear script, and fluid animation too! Not to mention actually a unique punchline for the end. Regarding Pigeon's hazardous habits of shitting all over the place - to me sea gulls are the main wielders of that nefarious trait! Pure evil, they are.
Would've been nice with a bit more refined line work, but for starters: this is great! Looking forward to more (and appreciating the more you are putting out these days).