This is not bad at all for your first try, just way too short. May i ask where you get your sound effects from?
findsounds.com, i warped and edited a lot of them though.
This was nice
I like this I especially like the black and white style of this all and such, it was a tad "SHORT" though maybe if you added other short clips it would ad some septh to it, and a pinch of "COLOR" wouldnt hurt either, but anyways nice effort here and nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color and more short clips to go along with this one.
Drawing wasnt bad at all pretty funny with the effects