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An animation made for Uni a couple months ago, my first attempt at traditional animation.

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That twist. XD For a first impression this had impressively clear script, and fluid animation too! Not to mention actually a unique punchline for the end. Regarding Pigeon's hazardous habits of shitting all over the place - to me sea gulls are the main wielders of that nefarious trait! Pure evil, they are.

Would've been nice with a bit more refined line work, but for starters: this is great! Looking forward to more (and appreciating the more you are putting out these days).

-cd-



This is not bad at all for your first try, just way too short. May i ask where you get your sound effects from?


CalvinThomasUK responds:

findsounds.com, i warped and edited a lot of them though.


This was nice

I like this I especially like the black and white style of this all and such, it was a tad "SHORT" though maybe if you added other short clips it would ad some septh to it, and a pinch of "COLOR" wouldnt hurt either, but anyways nice effort here and nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color and more short clips to go along with this one.

~X~



Drawing wasnt bad at all pretty funny with the effects


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Uploaded
Jan 13, 2017
3:16 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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