Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Interested in hearing feedback.
entertaining
So this was cool I really like the colorful characters and art style here, the "VOICES" are really good on this one, the humor was pretty good, but most of all I found it to be pretty entertaining, so for the mostpart this was pretty entertaining and you should make more like this.
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Ad more to the story more depth.
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lmao. XD Appreciate the refreshingly spontaneous script! It took it to the next level after the pigeon one. The silent alarm on a lemonade stand seemed like the big twist, but it turns out... they're all playing a game...? The fear in that kid's face seemed so genuine, though. Feels like a fresh joke, but still... maybe not as clearly presented as it could have been.
In terms of animation and voicing it's definitely a step up after the other! Nice work.
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Oh man, if i could even remember as far back as the conception of this lol. I dunno, i started this some point in mid 2016 and silent alarm really doesn't make any sense...was jus thrown in there i guess because i found it funny? Anyway, great feedback, appreciate it!
The voices were hilarious. Also I like your fluffy puffy cartoonish style with an extra coolness to the characters- keep it up! Would've enjoyed it way more if the plot was a little longer, though...