I will admit some of these pieces of animation were pretty legit and everything, but something like this would be better off in the dumping grounds rather than being submitted under judgement. Anything under judgement will have to be a legit animation project instead of experimental animation tests. Those type of videos would likely get a low score if not blamed. Although I'm sure this submission will be saved and everything, but still. Also a nitpick, but any kind of audio would be nice. Music, sound effects, etc would really help make your video more engaging. Without audio, your submission will may come off as boring to a lot of people. It's ok for what it is, but just remember to put content like this in the dumping grounds next time. I'm just saying.

nice animation 3.5stars