decided to play this after trying 3-4/5-6 games of the sequel, and the stories where all pretty good. A great RPG maker adventure game for sure. Personaly rate the stories Penelope>House>Maniac>Tyler.
Unless you count the blooper mirror scene; D

(could not resist that joke; p)
Personally I think Tyler's storylines conflict too much with eachother.
Unless I stretch the story somewhat and assume Mary is Abby and that the dad made a deal with her, the story end up with inconsistencies, And there is not enough there to make that assumption either. there where also 2 minor issues 1 you flipped the equation in the Penelope chest puzzle it should be "substract the third number from the first number", (1-4≠3) 2 by removing the press X to remove blindfold at the start you could make this tablet/phone accessible, just an idea.
So I can't give you full marks still the rest of it was great so a nice 4/5

I loved the stories on this ... great game hopefully see more like this maybe with more puzzles and i like that you have choices thats a really good concept to put into any game so gave it 5 for creativity and art work was great. i would definitly play again one day.....i do have an idea though and a thought .... why was the lady in the first story able to go out the apartment .... and outside without her kiddo lol like who would actually do that she must really be crazy lol and walk into a bloody warehouse and be like oh let me just see whats in here while her son is still in the apartment fussing about not going to the park lol but i really really liked this game very nice. oh another good idea maybe is at the end after you choose all the stories a part unlocks where you can be one of the main characters telling the stories and different endings come out of that .... them making it home or to the others and the choices they make to get there...just thought about it after i played it.. awesome job whoever made this.. 5 stars none the less :)

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I absolutely loved all the stories so it was hard to choose they were all good, although mike was kinda being an asshole the entire time, I liked the story it was really good, though because of that well ya know where I'm going with this, do make more of these bro absolutely loved it, the bloopers were pretty funny too nice addition.

OMG, 90s Nickelodeon references! I think your 90s references during the Bloopers/Deleted Scenes portion of the game are impressive. First the "I'm Too Sexy," by Right Said Fred and then you brought up Parker Lewis Can't Lose (except for that one time...)...and don't think I didn't notice how Tabitha Corbin is very close to Tabitha Soren.

Talking about a Ferris Bueller knockoff that's better than what they intended for the it's series.

So back to the game.

I would have liked a title screen that allowed me to load my progress. I had to keep pressing X till I got to the screen about Save/Load game data in order for me to get back to where I left off.

The doll code in The Haunted House confused me for a moment, so I had to consult the walkthrough...and I was even more confused until I went back into the game and noticed the slight discoloration. You might want to make the difference in color a bit more obvious as it was hard to detect. Depending on where a person is playing this and their settings, they might not be able to see the clue you left in the puzzle.

Another thing about this particular puzzle is that, logically, the code doesn't make sense. Your emphasis was clearly their age at the time of death, however you have the sisters mixed up. Even if an older sister died at a young age and you outlived her, she's still your older sister. It doesn't change just because you lived to be an older age. I'm kinda disappointed in that logic.

Other than that, it's a good try. I think the most exciting story for me was The Maniac, but only because I had to enable the Dash feature to get away from the wolf, and there was the threat of dying. The other story to give that sort of thing was likely Tyler...but that was it. Penelope and The Haunted House pretty much fell short.