My first flash animation (Animate CC). Its very rough with lots of mistakes but its my first so i hope you would like it. Please suggest me to improve. Thanks
I think this is a pretty good first attempt. I liked the joke at end!
A few suggestions/comments are:
The beginning shot is a little long. The stick figure just walks across the screen—It's boring. I'd make that shot shorter or add something into the shot to make it less monotonous.
The audio for the car comes way too early.
I don't think the 6 sec credits are necessary on a piece this short. I'd just sign it in the corner.
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This had a solid set up—I hope you keep at it.
Thanks a lot, AchromaticHue. I will definitely work on the things you have mentioned and try to do better.
It has a lot more to it than a lot of first animations, in that it actually has sound, it has somewhat of a payoff at the end, and the animation isn't too bad. It's just really short and lacks enough hilarity/violence/whatever to make it worth more than I'm giving it - you've got something going, just try to expand things into something more in depth for your next upload
Thanks jonthomson, will do longer video next time and will try making it more exciting.