That is pretty good. I liked how the owl is all serious while the elephant is all careless, making for a strong contrast between the two. Nice job!
This is one part of my series 'what is art'
Check the other parts on my youtube channel :)
https://www.youtube.com/user/xXbruuutXx
If you have ideas for improvement or other feedback please please let me know!
Here are the other 2 parts:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZagmX2poaI&t=1s
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Xecdf3SbZs
That is pretty good. I liked how the owl is all serious while the elephant is all careless, making for a strong contrast between the two. Nice job!
thanks :)
loved the elephants poem :) the wise owl, seeing pain in the world, the playful young elephant, not a care in the world
visually, i love the children books approach, clean and soft, but you could've added some background to make it more appealing and show some depth to the video
your sound design could use some work, maybe some (more) music on the background to fill in the empty spaces, or give it some depth since your audio recording is very flat. the triggered sfx (you can deffo hear that you've heard it before in a different video with loud volume, not wanting to put someone else through it) was a bit too long and "empty"
keep it up! :)
Thanks for the feedback! I did some video's where there is music under the whole thing, and that is indeed much better. I'll keep that in mind for future video's.
Good thing you said about the background. I normally draw real children books with all the background stuff and a lot more precision, but that's too much work for such a video. I think I'll try some simple backgrounds next time. A color or trees, and at least a floor.
And about the triggered sfx you're totally right, but normally I post it on youtube and that is the end card with subscribe etc.
Thanks again, this is feedback were I can work with!
greetings,
Aldo