i was waiting for this chapter to come out and its finally here! the story is amazing but it needs more connection in my personal view but other then that your doing great :)

EYYYY! You're back! Glad to have you here again in NG. I can't wait!
@NDSpencer | Go check out all of his hentai games. All they do is read and click next and nobody seems to have a problem with it.

The art is good, I just wish I was doing something. All that the player does is read and click next.

Please make more I like this when's the next chapter coming?

My thoughts on this are simple, I personally believe that it shows a hell of promise given how much time you mustve worked on this. and the style of your drawings are amazing, although I believe this demo or trial or whatever you wanna call it, is much too short to be given fair judgement. However despite the fact its short I genuinely think this chapter will do great and not a minute of your time would have been wasted.