This was notbad

So here was a cool piece you had here I like the idea here and I have to say the voices came into play very well so nice job on this one it just all came together and I really like the story or idea here so anyways good stuff here and a good film maybe make it longer

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Make it longer more depth to the story

~X~

I can see a certain potential for this. I don't know if it's exactly for this particular plotline along with the setting, but there's always a certain space in the visual and audio arts for the stuff that makes us take pause and say "WTF"....
Yeah, I'm going to have to make a comment on the choice casting in the VO here, so this is it. XD!
Now, that being said, there has been a huge span of history where there weren't any women in the business, so even the female parts were taken by male actors (and later a great opportunity that is still unfilled with humor) lolz...
I think some of the VO lines felt/sounded a little clunky, but if that's part of your point chalk it up to style and intent, and my best wishes as you tease this around and flesh it all out. You might do well to watch a few old clips from Monty Python's Flying Circus as you think about twists and gags (even if it's just to rule out what's already been done to death) and I look forward to seeing something more before a final vote is decided whether to quash this or just pick apart what works from what don't.
Now, there might be those around here who hate on you and drag your ratings down, but they might just be haters... or jealous they didn't think it would be funny first... or both...
Laugh, breathe, keep at it.... and we'll just have to see.

Voice acting really takes the comedy to a new level. XD Not sure I really follow the punchline, but eh... random is entertaining too. Not bad.

-cd-